Review of 10% day

I have to say that my story wasn't going very well these days, and I was very frustrated about that.
I made 6 versions storyboards and transferred 2 of them into animatics. But they finally turned out, not very satisfied.

Since I'm taking another class called "Cinematography", I started realize that I didn't have a solid knowledge of storyboard and all my work before were done by casual and intuition... I never thought about why I use the shot or why the shot works, so when I started thinking about them, somehow my brain will mess the new knowledge and the "casual" stuff together, which gives me a very hard time deciding where to go. It makes me sad many times.

I feel a little better now because after last week, I kind feel everything I learned starts to come together, and I begin to understand what does not make sense in my animatic. I guess what I'll do next is to add a scratch sound while fixing my animatic, and try to do some animation tests in TV Paint.

The storyboards I made for these weeks

The latest storyboard (I transferred it into animatic)